Conclusion and Feedback

The outcomes that I have produced for this project are not as fully fleshed out as I would have liked as I struggled to effectively manage the amount of work that I needed to complete over the course of this timeline.

I was unable to complete everything to a polished standard and my submission of the presentation to the Padlet board was a bit late. As such, I have individually asked a few of my peers to give me some feedback which I have summarised into general points and broken down for each outcome:

General comments:

You have a unique style that is consistent through the range of work shown.
Your illustrations themselves tell a story without you needing to explain it.
It would be nice to see these images on your Instagram onto your portfolio and website.
It would be nice to see a final design for the manifesto.
Overall everything looks really professional and well done.

Behance:

Nice range of works, they are all in a similar style, look professional and good quality.
Add short descriptions to each project; make the “Cherry Picking” zine slower, because it was too fast to read.

Instagram:

Good range and quality of artworks; consistent posting.
Add more highlights to put “yourself” into the account: through stories, reels, post descriptions, photos. Now it looks more like a portfolio, rather than a blog.

Website:

The format is clear and well structured; consistent colour palette; good range and quality of works; informative about me page.
Not sure that the categories of the images are the most effective. A client would probably be more interested to see different types of work separated (digital, paintings, moving image, etc.).
Make sure that the videos play when opened to the full size.
Also make the titles smaller and more consistent in terms of capitalization, add a short description or explanation of the brief / pieces.

Unit: Exploring Studio Practices Project 03: The First Picture of You

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